Strangely, there was a
pungent smell invading my nostrils. Too absorbed into my show, I
ignored the odour and continued watching. All of a sudden, there was
a loud piercing scream. I spun around and realised that my brother's room
was on fire! A horried gasp escaped from my throat. My face
blanched in trepidation and my legs were literally manacled to the
ground. Venomous and life-threatening flames were spilling out of the
bedroom and debris was strewn everwhere. Jeyden's banshee-like shriek
jolted me out of my trance.
I ran to my neighbour, Mr
Johnson's house, pleading for help. He immediately took two buckets
of water from his house and rushed to the scene of the raging
inferno. It was a laborious task and perspiration glistened on his
lined forehead. Sadly, the efforts were ineffectual and the amber
flames continued licking the wall, melting the paint like wax.
“Jeyden, are you okay?”
I screamed raucously.
Silence. There was no
reply. A foreboding sense surged through me and made my hair stand.
My thoughts spun into a whirlpool. Was Jeyden dead? A million thoughts
hurtled through my mind and a woebegone emotion fell on me like a
tsunami. A tight knot fisted in my stomach as I feared the worst.
“I have to save Jeyden,
no matter what!” a voice richocheted in my head. Brushing the
ominous thought aside, I regained equanimity and hatched a rescue
plan for my brother. I ran to my parents' bedroom, grabbed the
bedsheet and soaked it in water.
Just as I was about to
charge into the room with the soaked cloak over me, Mr Johnson blocked the
entrance and yelled, “Son, it is too dangerous!”
“I have to save my
brother!” I beseeched him but it was to no avail.
Out of desperation, I
thrust past him and dashed in. All around me was the flaming
monster. Pungent smell and smoke besiged me and my skin felt the
intense heat despite the soaked bedsheet. I crouched low to avoid
the toxic fumes. As I searched, I spotted Jeyden easily as he was
clad in a sunny-yellow pyjamas. He had blacked out so I heaved him
into my arms. Boy, he was as heavy as a sack of potatoes!
I scrambled towards the
entrance but it was blocked by the raging inferno. At this critical
juncture, I spotted an alternative exit which was a broken window
pane. Thick columns of choking fumes were escaping from it.
Gingerly, I removed all the sharp, jagged edges.
Lady Luck was smiling at
us! Below, the sight of a crimson red fire engine greeted me. A huge
air mattress was beckoning for us to jump. I took a leapt of faith
and threw Jeyden down. Thank goodness! He was safe! Next, I jumped
too.
“Jeyden, Jeyden! Wake
up!” I slapped his face lightly. Jeyden stirred and opened his
dark marble eyes.
My brother was alive!
Relief inundated me as hot tears welled up in my eyes and splashed
downwards. Hapless sobs hitched in my dry throat for we have survived the
ordeal unscathed!
Raeann Lee, P6
Raeann Lee, P6
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