Showing posts with label Writing Tips. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing Tips. Show all posts

Saturday, June 25, 2016

PSLE: Writing a great introduction and close for a PSLE composition



Theme: Danger

Original Introduction
It was a balmy day and the water looked as smooth as glass except for the occasional ripples.  Jay intended to explore the river behind his grandmother’s house.
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Writing Techniques: Senses (sound, smell, sight, taste, touch), Appearance + Dressing, Thoughts and Feelings, Hook

It was a balmy day. (2-3 details on how you think a balmy day looks like)  Birds were chirping melodiously on the gnarled tree branches.  Butterflies were already busy fluttering around collecting nectar. The smell of the colourful flowers lingered in the air.  Jay was making his way to the river bank.  His lanky (appearance) legs thumped on the dead leaves, making them crackle.  He smiled (facial expression) as he gazed (do not use ‘see’) at the river.  The greenish (color) water looked as smooth as glass (simile) except for the occasional ripples.  Exuberance (feeling) bubbled in him when he spotted (do not use ‘see’) a boat beside the river bank.  It was going to be a day of adventure.  Little did he know that great danger was looming nearby... 
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Original Conclusion
Suddenly, while Jay was struggling, the whole boat capsized.  Without hesitation, the crocodile immediately attacked Jay’s right leg trying to pull him down into the water.  After that, no one knew where Jay was.
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Revised Climax and Close
The crocodile gave the boat a massive slap with its humongous tail.  The impact was so powerful that the boat overturned and Jay flew off the boat and splashed into the water.  (BODY) Jay was choked by the water that rushed into his mouth and nostrils.  Being a lousy swimmer without a life jacket, he struggled for air.  As if that was not bad enough (THOUGHT), the crocodile lunged (vivid verb) towards him and opened his gigantic jaws wide.   Lines of razor-sharp teeth glinted in the sun. With a loud snap, Jay’s right leg was completely ripped off. Blood immediately turned the river crimson red. After a struggle, the splashes and ripples soon turned feeble and became no more.

The day turned dark and dreary.  The birds no longer sang.  The butterflies hid themselves.  The smell of death rose like vapour from the ground.  The greenish water looked as smooth as glass once more.  No one knew where Jay was.



The river awaits its next victim. (Implied Theme)

Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Tip: How to write a better ending to any narratives





Many students have asked me how to write a good ending to their stories. Most narrative writers fail to give their stories a fine ending. Most of them are cliches. "I learnt a lesson" and "we went home happily" are just some of the common examples. 

Let me share with you one of the secrets of writing well. In order to bring satisfaction to a reader, the story written can be written to come in one full circle. To do so, the writer can use a particularly strong imagery to end the story that has already appeared at the start or the middle of the story. 

For example, in the above video clip, the director repeatedly weaved the idea of "more rice, more rice" at both the start and the end of the clip. The change was that instead of the mother saying it to the son, it was now the son's turn to say it to the mother. 

This video clip shows a change in the way the same imagery is used. This is a beautiful example of how to use a powerful repeated imagery to start and end the narrative. 

Try this technique. Your ending will definitely become more unique and stands out more compared to other writers. Have fun in your writing journey!

Mrs Lee


Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Writing Tips: Describe characters using adjectives

Friendly
The friendly girl shook hands amicably with the new student and soon they became fast friends.

Courageous
The courageous commandoes stomped into the enemy's barracks and rescued the hostages.

Composed
Even though the bomb would explode within seconds, the bomb squad remained composed to defuse the explosives.

Meticulous
He checked his answers meticulously to ensure that there was no mistakes made.

Compassionate
The kind woman showed compassion to the blind beggar by giving him all the money in her wallet and all her coins as well.

Rowdy
The rowdy boy was misbehaving and got into a confrontation with the teacher.

Obstinate
The obstinate girl refused to apologise for her rudeness despite repeated warnings.

Passive
When the principal gave her an earful, the girl wore a passive expression and stared at him blankly.

Critical
The parents were very critical of the school and planned to withdraw her.

Rebellious
The rebellious boys had their black hair dyed luminous green and their arms bore tattoos of hideous-looking skulls.









Writing Tips: Similes and Personification

Similes
as happy as a lark = as happy as a circus clown

as sturdy as an oak = as fit as an Olympic athlete

cannot move at all = as stiff as a metal pole

as free as a bird = as free as a wild stallion

as pale as death = as pale as a dying man

brave like a lion = as courageous as a fireman

thin as rake = as bony as a skeleton

hoarse as a crow = as hoarse as sandpaper

tough as leather = as stubborn as a strong-willed teenager 


 as wise as an owl = as wise as a judge


Personification

An stormy sea

The angry sea was tossing the boats back and forth violently

A speeding police car

The police siren was demanding that everyone should give way.

A hungry boy

His stomach was growling for food.

A malfunctioning computer

The computer made weird noises.

A serious family problem

The divorce was tearing the family apart.

Wednesday, July 4, 2012

PSLE: Stealing from a vending machine


“Urgh!! The intensive training is so tiring! I really hate that Mrs Chan!” I muttered under my breath grudgingly. It was such a searing hot day. The sweltering heat was prickling my brone-tanned skin and I was literally melting away like a candle. Perspiration dotted my forehead as I trudged my way down the stairs with eager anticipation towards the canteen to get a drink.

What?! The stalls were all closed. “Life's never fair!” I grumbled. Just as I started stomping off, a brainwave hit me like a lightning bolt. I could get a drink from the school's vending machine. Without hesitation, I walked briskly towards it.

Saliva pooled in my mouth as I gazed at my desired drink 'Zapple'. Immediately, I slotted a one-dollar coin into the machine and waited. To my horror, no drinks came out. My coin was swallowed up by the greedy machine. I wanted a drink badly and inserted another coin. This time, the stupid machine devoured my coin again! My last coin! My last hope! I placed it into the coin slit and prayed, “Please don't let me down this time!” Once again, nothing emerged from the stubborn machine.

“I hate you, you stupid machine! Three dollars is not enough to satisfy you!” I fumed. Smoke was now literally coming out of my ears and nose. I had just wasted three days' worth of allowance. Frustration swelled up in me. Out of revenge, I started kicking the machine viciously and rammed my fist repeatedly at the machine.

Just at that defining moment, I heard a soft rumble coming from within the machine. I stopped, my breath hitched in my throat. Then, magically, an avalanche of canned drinks cascaded out! Ah! My precious Zapple!

One, two, three...eleven! I was on cloud nine, getting eleven cans instead of three. Thanks, Mr Machine! Just as I was about to leave, the vending machine rattled and belched out coins after coins. “One dollar, two dollars, three dollars... forty-five dollars!” I exclaimed. I stood rooted to the ground, my mouth agape in bewilderment. It was more than my whole year of savings. I could not believe my good fortune! My lucky stars were shining on me!

“Take the coins, Curtis! You deserve them,” a voice whispered in my head. Darting my eyes from side to side, I knew that the coast was clear.  I took the money and shoved them into my gargantuan tennis bag. Just as I was about to discreetly put the last can in, a thunderous voice boomed across the entire canteen, “Boy, what are you doing?”

A silhouette approached me and soon loomed over my lanky frame. It was the vending machine technician. His company's name, Yeo, was embossed on his shirt. He glowered at me like a laser machine with his beady eyes glaring through his tousled fringe. It dawned on me that he had witnessed the entire scene.

“I am going to complain to your principal!” he hollered as his lips curled in distaste. He then dragged me to the 'death chamber'.

“What have you done this time, Curtis Johnson Tan?” Mr Pan roared at me, his face contorted in an angry scowl. Chills ran down my spine. It was obvious that Lady Luck was never on my side after all. I was doomed for! Butterflies fluttered in my stomach as my face blanched in trepidation at a loss of what to do. Nothing I could say or do would make any difference now.

“The technician has told me everything! You have attempted to steal! This is a serious offence!” Mr Pan shook his head fervently in disgust as he unleashed his tirade at me. Seconds stretched into minutes. Finally, his lecture ended. As if that was not enough, he called my parents who turned into into a zebra when I got home. “Curtis Tan, you deserve it!” I told myself. The cane marks really taught me a lesson. I was very sure there would never be a next time.

Tuesday, July 3, 2012

PSLE: Stealing from a shop

It was a dilemma for me. To steal or not to steal. If I were to steal, my sister's fever might subside and she might recover. If I did not, she might die. I had little choice. I decided to steal.

My dark brown eyes darted from side to side in the shop. Every passing minute, my heart was pounding more and more wildly. The grocery store was jam-packed with customers. I gazed at the panadol box on the shelf through my dishevelled fringe. Surreptiously, I mustered up my courage, swiftly nicked the medication box and stuffed it into my tattered pocket. As quick as lightning, my puny frame took off and whizzed towards towards the exit.

Suddenly, a loud voice hollered, “What is in your pocket, boy?” Shivers ran down my spine. I looked up and saw a gargantuan shopkeeper glowering at me with eyes like hot coals. Steam was literally blowing out of his ears as his face flushed beetroot red in anger.

Fear struck my heart like a crucifix. What should I do now? I was in hot soup! The shopkeeper had caught me red-handed and was now stomping toward me. The word “run” ricocheted in my head.

My legs took flight and I ran hell for leather. Unfortunately, I dropped the panadol. Should I just run off? I would be wasting my effort! I screeched to a halt and decided to run back to grab it. The shopkeeper was in hot pursuit. He seemed to be as fast as a cheetah and caught up with me, grabbing me by my collar.

“Please let me go!” I pleaded. “My sister is very sick and she needs the fever medicine badly!”

The shopkeeper was flabbergasted. He released his grip and spoke gently, “Could you tell me more?”

I was stunned and had to gather my thoughts. I then recounted how my kid sister was running a high temperature and we could not afford to see a doctor. I burst into tears and my eyes became like two gushing taps.

The shopkeeper's eyes turned red. His heart softened and he felt sorry for us. “You can keep the medicine and take this money to see a doctor. Don't steal again.”

I looked up, puzzled. In his hands was a fifty-dollar note. I was speechless. How could I be so lucky to meet such a kind soul? My heart was filled with remorse and I was paralyzed with guilt. Knowing my sister need the medicine desperately, I could only nod and mutter my apologies before dashing off to save my sister.

 

Saturday, June 30, 2012

Proposal on Earth Day Celebrations


Your address

Date

Ms Tan Li Chen
Teacher-in-charge
Conservation Club
Gaia Secondary School
83 Gaia Ave
Singapore 88888



Dear Ms Tan

Proposal for Earth Day Celebrations

I am writing with regard to the Earth Day celebrations this coming March. As this celebration would last for one entire week in school, I suggest that classes of different levels would be assigned to different activities.

For the lower secondary classes, I would like to propose for a costume design competition where every class would come up with a design using only recycled or recyclable products. The teams would be judged based on how creative the costume is and how many types of recycled products are used. Classes will be penalised if they buy their materials. The Conservation Club would then source for attractive prizes to be awarded to the best design. In this way, the students would have a deeper understanding of how materials at home can be reused and recycled so that less resources would be wasted.

For the upper secondary classes, I would like to suggest that we could organise field trips to the New-water factory and one of the 'green' companies. At the New-water factory, students would get to see the treatment of water and understand how this system works. Others can visit the environmental-friendly companies, students would get to see how newspapers and cans drinks are recycled to make into new products to prevent wastage. Students will then come back to write about what they have learned learn from the field trip and give a class presentation.

I hope that you would seriously consider my suggestions and grant your approval. Thank you for your kind attention. I look forward to your favourable response.


Yours sincerely,

ang
Hong Zheng Ang
Secondary 2A

Saturday, June 23, 2012

What important lessons in life are learned away from school?


Education plays a pivotal role in the life of any person. Some think that learning is done primarily in school. It is true that educational institutions have been so entwined with the process of learning where students learn languages and a variety of other subjects to learn how to communicate and analyze. However, important lessons outside school are also important to develop skills in us to prepare us for the future.

One of the most important lessons that school cannot teach is morality. School cannot and will not be the yardstick of right and wrong. To be a person of integrity, one could probably attend a religious institution and learn the principles of upright living. To be morally upright would definitely help one to be a better person and grant him the inner peace that he needs for daily living. Living by the religious principles such as the Proverbs in the bible would also be able to guard him from committing follies that can be avoided.

Another important lesson that one can learn outside school is the skills of financial planning. Although school teaches the calculation of figures, it does not teach us how these figures would affect us financially in our lives. By learning to budget wisely, one would not end up in unnecessary debts. It is not uncommon to find young adults under a huge credit-card debt. To avoid such dire situations, one needs to learn the discipline to save, invest and spend wisely so that there will be wealth accumulation and funds set aside for a rainy day.

Beside financial planning, we must learn lessons of hardship and perseverance. Without such values, one would be easily set back by failures. Hence, taking vacational jobs to earn some pocket money is an excellent opportunity to learn how to withstand hardship. For example, I was employed as a waiter in a five-star hotel. Having to stand daily for hours has taught me to take hardship in good stride. Such lesson would not have been made possible in school where children learn academic success above anything else.

Finally, the school usually does not teach us the skills of widening and deepening friendship. Learning the right communication skills and the social boundary that we should keep between friends will enable us to understand and appreciate our friends better. A widening social circle and an inner sphere of intimate friends are important to help one succeed in life. A friend can be there to give advice, provide business opportunities and even provide a listening skill. Unfortunately, the school does not provide such skills and this could only be learnt from home and interaction with the outside world.

In conclusion, it is a fallacy to think that everything can be learnt in school. One should always display a willingness to learn and relearn out of school context to be able to strive and thrive in this changing world.

O LEVEL Nov 2010 Paper 1

Friday, June 22, 2012

PSLE: A Canary Visit


Jason dug into his pocket and reached for his catapult. He was feeling so sleepy, hoping that the class would end soon. The lesson was so dreary as Mr Kevin's voice droned on monotonously. It was history lesson and the class was as still as a tomb. Everyone was trying to concentrate. Even though Jason tried to focus, his teacher's words were a hopeless jumble in his head.

The day was dragging on torturously. Jason rubbed his bleary eyes and stifled a yawn. He shifted his body and stayed awake. The chair groaned noisily under his bulky weight. Just then, there was a flash of golden yellow. The twittering of a bird was heard. What could that possibly be? Out of the blue, a brilliant yellow canary zoomed like a bullet into the classroom, narrowly missing the whirling blades of the fan by inches.


Jason instantly shot alert and his eyes immediately brightened up. He whipped his head around and spotted the yellow bird perch on the teacher's head. Shoo! Shoo! The teacher shook his head furiously, trying to chase the bird away. Now, the canary darted across the classroom, trying to find a landing spot.


Chaos broke out! The girls huddled together, shrieking like banshees whenever the bird flew too close. As for the boys, they tried to catch the bird. Every boy has transformed instantly into a bird-hunter.


“Calm down, everyone!” Mr Kevin's commanding voice rose above the din but to no avail. No one was listening! The poor teacher stared in bewilderment at the noisy ruckus.

Jason watched the yellow canary with great interest. In the midst of confusion, he took out his treasure – the catapult! He waited patiently for the bird to perch. The bird finally rested on the beam of the door. Three, two, one – fire! Strike! His tactic worked! The bird fell onto the floor like a domino.


“Yay!!” everyone exclaimed. “Jason is a pro!” the children cheered. It was a moment of glory for him. His friends all clapped their hands with glee. Jason smiled triumphantly.

“Jason Pang! What did you do to my poor bird?” It was the authoritative voice of the principal, Mrs Ong. Jason gave a long sigh. He knew he was in trouble! Poor Jason! He followed her to her office, knowing that he had to face the music. Still, he was extremely happy inside, knowing that he was the hero of the day.

Sunday, May 20, 2012

O Level Discussion Essay: Should we embrace technology in education?


iPad v a lump of clay  By Cecilia Kang

WASHINGTON - The sixth-graders are lighting up the room with their MacBook Airs, flipped open to Google, Wikipedia and YouTube, for a physics assignment. Their classroom is decked out with touch-screen whiteboards, tablets and powerful Wi-Fi connections able to handle a school full of children online at once.


'Cool!' Nina Jenkins says, opening links to websites that take her deeper into the study of acoustics. She's making a small drum by hand and will record herself playing it on iMovie. At the end of the project, she'll write her reflections in 140 characters or less - in a tweet.


In the same week, about a dozen kilometres away, another set of sixth-graders is on a similar lesson. Only they are in a spare, birch-hued classroom that looks like a throwback to the Norman Rockwell era. There are no computers here. The only tools being used are spoons and forks tied together with purple yarn.  The students listen to the clang of utensils changing pitch as the yarn is shortened and lengthened. Nina Auslander-Padgham's eyes widen with the discovery, and she rushes back to her wooden desk to write her reflections on the blank pages of a red hardcover journal.

At these two Washington area private schools, separated only by a 20-minute drive, the two Ninas may as well exist on different planets. They are growing up on opposite sides of a gaping educational divide formed not by the usual school fissures of economics and race. Theirs is a division wrought by technology.
The Flint Hill School in Oakton, Virginia, is ultra-wired. Apple hails it as a model for its embrace of devices. Its teachers believe technology immersion will make their pupils more excited about learning and better prepared for college and careers. So they've given each child a device - starting with an iPad for every preschooler and MacBook Airs starting in the fifth grade.   'Tech is like oxygen,' said Flint Hill's dean of faculty Shannan Schuster. 'It's all around us, so why wouldn't we try to get our children started early?'

The Washington Waldorf School in Bethesda, Maryland, is trying to stay unplugged. Its teachers think technology is a distraction and overhyped. They believe children are better taught through real-world experiences in the school's vegetable garden and woodwork shop. Educators at the school fear that the immediate gratification of texts and Wikipedia threatens face-to-face communication and original thinking, so they ban cellphones, laptops and tablets and require pupils to hand-write papers until high school.
'What is the rush?' said Ms Natalie Adams, Washington Waldorf's faculty chair. 'There is a time and a place for technology, but children need to first relate to the physical world around them.'

The independent pre-K-to-12 schools are able to make such stark choices because of the flexibility their private boards and budgets allow them. And though they may represent the extremes, their experiences offer touchstones for parents and educators unsure about the promises of learning through technology for this ultra-connected generation.

Amid a sweeping fancy for mobile devices, Americans are wrestling to understand how technology is shaping their lives. And nowhere is that more evident than in the debate over how much we should expose our children to technology.

For parents, there are no definitive answers. Academic research seems to provide contradictory findings. And the federal government has barely begun to grapple with the effects of technology on children, even as it spends billions of dollars to bring broadband Internet to schools and libraries, and offers big tax breaks for educational software and gadgets by Apple and Microsoft.

'We have to stop and think if we are embracing technology just because it is there and new or if it is the best tool for what we want to accomplish,' said Mr Michael Rich, director of the Centre on Child Media and Health at Harvard University. 'Sometimes the answer is that an iPad is great, but does it really do a better job than a hunk of clay or paper?'

Recent studies show children are being exposed to far more media than any previous generation, largely because of the explosion of smartphones and tablets in the home.

But is this healthy for their development? Some research shows that software programs such as smartphone applications help improve kids' vocabulary and mathematics. Children aged three to seven who used an app called Martha Speaks increased their vocabulary by as much as 31 per cent in two weeks, according to a 2010 study commissioned by PBS. Some educators say technology allows them to personalise teaching plans and offer free online tutoring, a way to break free from cookie-cutter lessons that don't resonate with every child.

However, child development experts say children are developing shorter attention spans and multi-tasking too much online - habits that will become more ingrained over time. Technology is changing the way kids learn, too; ideas aren't as original when cobbled together through Google searches and recycled from opinion blogs, teachers at Waldorf say.


And students are increasingly skipping over basic disciplines such as spelling and handwriting - practices that have diminished in importance in the workplace but are still key to wiring the young brain, some child-development experts say.

In February, the US Education Department, along with the Federal Communications Commission, called for all American classrooms to adopt digital textbooks by 2017. The goal was inspired by South Korea - which is now rethinking the merits of online books over paper textbooks.

'I'm calling for investments in educational technology that will help create digital tutors that are as effective as personal tutors, educational software as compelling as the best video game,' President Barack Obama said last year while touring a tech-focused school in Boston.

At the same time, the department has found that past investments in educational technology have not paid off. In a 2009 report, it found that students who used maths and reading software over a one-year period scored the same on tests as peers who did not use the programs.

The contrasting approaches on technology show a sharp dividing line between the two suburban Washington schools - and the families of the two Ninas.

Otherwise, the girls would find much in common. They are fans of Adele's moody ballads and the book The Hunger Games. They are svelte and athletic but haven't outgrown pinks and pastels. They are thoughtful and observant students; they won't be the first to speak up in class but aren't afraid to express their views either.
Both Ninas are on a track to succeed, if the academic performance of their schools is any measure.
Seniors at Washington Waldorf and Flint Hill score in the mid- to high 600s on each part of the SAT. They are going to elite colleges such as Stanford, Yale and the University of Virginia - which is not uncommon in the highly educated Washington region.

WASHINGTON POST

Source: http://khooky.blogspot.com/2012/05/ipad-v-lump-of-clay.html#more


O Level Discussion Essay: What Singapore can learn from Europe (By Tommy Koh)


IT IS a sad reflection on human nature that when a region is faced with a crisis, it is often treated with disdain instead of sympathy. I recall that during the Asian financial crisis of 1997-1998, some of our European and American friends were extremely unkind and predicted that Asia would suffer a lost decade.

We must not do the same to Europe which has been faced with a serious financial and economic crisis since 2008. I have, therefore, decided to swim against the tide of anti-Europe sentiments.

I wish to highlight the fact that not all the countries of Europe are in crisis. Last year, of the 27 European Union countries, only three had a negative growth rate. In the 2010-2011 Global Competitiveness Index of the World Economic Forum, six EU countries were ranked among the 10 most competitive countries.

I wish to make the case that Singapore has much to learn from the successful countries of Europe. I will focus on four European countries whose populations are below 10 million – namely, Denmark, Finland, Norway and Sweden.


LESSON NO. 1

Inclusive growth

THE citizens of the world aspire to live in fair societies. One important aspect of fairness is the equitable distribution of income and wealth. This is the moral force behind the economic doctrine of inclusive growth. As a result of globalisation, technological change and domestic policies, many countries have become extremely unequal.

The Occupy Wall Street movement is a reflection of the American people’s sentiments against a growth model which over-rewards the top 1 per cent and under-rewards the remaining 99 per cent. The inequality in Singapore, as measured by the Gini coefficient, is even greater than that in America. Too great a gap between rich and poor undermines solidarity and social cohesion. It poses a threat to our harmony and our sense of nationhood.

Let us compare Singapore, on the one hand, and Denmark, Finland, Norway and Sweden on the other. Their per capita incomes in 2010 were as follows:

Singapore: S$59,813
Denmark: S$69,249(€42,500)
Finland: S$54,584 (€33,500)
Norway: S$105,096 (€64,500)
Sweden: S$60,613 (€37,200)


The Gini coefficient is used universally as a summary measure of income inequality. It is based upon the difference between the incomes of the top 20 per cent and the bottom 20 per cent. Zero represents total income equality and one represents total inequality. What are the Gini coefficients of the five countries? In 2010, they were as follows:

Singapore: 0.46
Denmark: 0.27
Finland: 0.25
Norway: 0.24
Sweden: 0.24

In order to get a better sense of the wages earned in the five countries by the bottom 20-30 per cent of the working population, I have chosen the cleaner and the bus driver. The average monthly wages of the cleaner and bus driver in the five countries are as follows:

Singapore
Cleaner S$800     Bus driver S$1,800
Denmark
Cleaner S$5,502  Bus driver S$6,193
Finland
Cleaner S$2,085  Bus driver S$3,910
Norway
Cleaner S$5,470  Bus driver S$6,260
Sweden
Cleaner S$3,667   Bus driver S$4,480




A few observations are in order.
First, Singapore’s per capita income is roughly similar to those of Denmark, Finland and Sweden.

Second, the four Nordic countries are much more equitable than Singapore. This is reflected in their Gini coefficients as well as in the average monthly wages earned by the cleaner and the bus driver.

Third, some Nordic countries have a minimum wage and some, such as Denmark, do not. The minimum wage is, therefore, a means but not the only means to ensure that workers earn a living wage.

Fourth, the argument that the only way to raise the wages of our low-wage workers is through productivity increase is not persuasive. I would like to know, for example, how the two women who clean my office can be more productive than they already are in order to deserve higher wages? I would like to know how the Singapore bus driver can be more productive so that his income will approximate those of his Nordic counterparts?

The truth is that we pay these workers such low wages not primarily because their productivity is inherently low, but largely because they are competing against an unlimited supply of cheap foreign workers. Because cheap workers are so plentiful, they tend to be employed unproductively. In the Nordic countries, unskilled workers are relatively scarce and thus deployed more productively, with higher skills, mechanisation, and better organisation.


What is the solution? The solution is for the State to reduce the supply of cheap foreign workers or introduce a minimum wage or to target specific industries, such as the hospitality industry, for wage enhancement.

LESSON NO. 2

Higher fertility

ONE of our challenges is our low fertility rate. For a country’s population to remain stable, it needs a total fertility rate (TFR) of 2.14. Singapore’s current TFR is 1.2. Our population experts tell us that our population will begin to shrink by 2025. They have, therefore, argued that, to make up the deficit, we need to import foreigners to add to our population.

Importing foreigners is the second best solution. The best solution is to raise our TFR. On this point, our policymakers seem to have run out of ideas. The various incentive schemes, such as baby bonus, do not seem to be productive. It is time to look at our four European countries for inspiration. Their 2010 TFRs were as follows:

Denmark: 1.87
Finland: 1.87
Norway: 1.95
Sweden: 1.98


The four Nordic countries have TFRs which are close to the replacement level. This achievement seems extraordinary. They do not have the benefit of maids. There are over 200,000 foreign domestic workers in Singapore. They also do not have grandparents who help with child-rearing. At the same time, they have very high participation of women in their workforces. In terms of availability of time and help for child-rearing, common sense would suggest that the TFR in Singapore should be higher than those in the Nordic countries. How do we explain this paradox?

Our population experts cannot explain this paradox. I will venture a hypothesis. I believe that the high TFR in the Nordic countries could be due to four factors: the availability of convenient, affordable and good childcare; good work-life balance; an excellent and relatively stress-free education system; and the relative absence of male chauvinism.

Let me say a few words on each of the four factors.

First, one of the missing links in Singapore is the inadequate supply of conveniently located, good quality and affordable childcare for infants and young children.

Second, the work-life balance in Singapore, especially for many young professionals such as lawyers, architects and teachers, is poor. Singaporeans work one of the longest hours in the developed world. They have little energy for life other than work and thus little time for meaningful family life.

The Government and our employers should reflect on whether the existing climate of encouraging or requiring our young professionals to work late into the night is necessary or desirable.


Third, sociologists like Paulin Straughan have pointed out that Singapore’s highly competitive and stressful education system is also a deterrent to working parents having more children. The Nordic countries, on the other hand, are famous for their high quality, egalitarian education which fulfils the children’s aspiration for a happy childhood. It is a paradox that Finland, with no streaming, no elite schools and no private tuition industry, is ranked as having the world’s best education system.

Fourth, it is significant that the developed countries with low TFRs include Japan, Korea, Italy and Spain, which have a high degree of male chauvinism. Is it possible that Singapore too has a high degree of male chauvinism? The women of Singapore are often blamed for not marrying and having children. Perhaps, the main problem is not our women but our men. Perhaps, what we also need is a mindset change on the part of our men towards the status and role of our women and the shared responsibilities of the husband and wife, and father and mother in domestic chores and child-rearing.


LESSON NO. 3

Embracing nature and sustainable development

SINGAPORE is probably Asia’s cleanest, greenest and most liveable city. Our air is healthy, our water is potable and our land is wholesome. In addition, we enjoy good public health and food safety. Visitors are astonished by the fact that, in spite of our high density, 47 per cent of our land is covered in greenery. In view of this, the reader will ask what can we learn from the four Nordic countries? I suggest three things.


First, people there love nature and their natural heritage. They seem to have an emotional, even a spiritual, relationship with nature. They love their forests, lakes and fjords. In contrast, most Singaporeans tend to have a more pragmatic relationship with nature. They apply a cost-benefit analysis to the destruction of a natural heritage. Pragmatism is one of our virtues. We should, however, be aware of the defects of our virtues. Not everything in life can be monetised.

Second, we can learn useful lessons from the way in which the Nordic countries have been able to reconcile economic competitiveness with a deep commitment to sustainable development. After the 1992 Earth Summit, each of them has established a national commission to mainstream sustainable development.

In the case of Finland, the Prime Minister chairs the National Commission on Sustainable Development. The result is that there is a national consensus in each of those countries to internalise the ethic of sustainable development into all aspects of life.

Third, at the micro-level, there are lessons in areas where Singapore has room for improvement – for example, in energy efficiency, the use of solar energy, the recycling of waste, the use of non-polluting buses, changing unsustainable patterns of consumption and production, etc.

LESSON NO. 4

Heritage, culture and the arts


IN THE past two decades, inspired by the 1989 Ong Teng Cheong report and Mr George Yeo’s leadership at the then Ministry of Information and the Arts, Singapore has undergone a paradigm shift in the areas of heritage, culture and the arts. The arts have blossomed. More and more Singaporeans are interested in knowing their history and preserving their heritage. The trend is, therefore, favourable. What can we learn from the Nordic countries?

First, we can learn the importance of giving all our children a good education in the arts. We have made good progress in recent years. The opening of the Yong Siew Toh Conservatory of Music and the School of The Arts were important milestones.

We can strengthen arts education in our schools. We should consider starting courses in art history and museum studies at the undergraduate and graduate levels. This will help in the training of teachers, curators, dealers, collectors and museum administrators, all in short supply.

Second, we can emulate the achievements of the Nordic countries in respect of museums. They have an impressive range of museums with strong collections. They have been able to harness the benefit of public-private partnership. Their museum collections extend beyond their nations to the cultures of the world.

For example, the David Collection in Copenhagen is one of the world’s best collections of Islamic Art. The Kiasma Museum of Contemporary Art in Helsinki has a very ambitious programming agenda, covering Western as well as Asian and African art.

Third, because of their ancient Viking past and current strength in shipping and other maritime industries, Denmark, Norway and Sweden have outstanding museums of maritime history.


Given the importance of maritime trade to Singapore’s past and present, it is puzzling that we do not have a museum of maritime history. I hope one day the historic Clifford Pier, which now houses a restaurant, will be the home of a world-class museum of maritime history. When that time comes, we can look to the Nordic countries for inspiration.

By Tommy Koh, For The Straits Times, May 19, 2012
The writer is chairman, Centre for International Law and Rector, Tembusu College, National University of Singapore.
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Saturday, May 19, 2012

O Level Speech: Save the environment


The girl who silenced the world for 5 minutes.


This is an excellent speech that stirs your emotions and propels you into action.

O Level Discussion Essay: What makes a great teacher?


Teaching is one of the most demanding jobs today.  It is a respectable profession that does not pay handsomely.  A great teacher must have a broad knowledge of subject matter and curriculum;  the know-how of discipline and classroom management techniques; a passion for teaching and learning; and a desire to make a difference in the lives of young people.  This essay will discuss the distinctive traits of great teachers.

First and foremost, great teachers exhibit expertise in the subjects that they are teaching and spend time continuing to gain knowledge in their field. For instance, a teacher in software development must be able to update himself with the latest software knowledge since it is not uncommon to see students who are more advanced in their computing skills than their teachers.  If the teacher shows that he is in the continual progress of subject mastery, this will equip him to teach and guide better and motivate the students to learn more on their own.

Secondly, great teachers must also know how to manage the classroom and instill discipline in the students.  They prepare their lessons in a clear and structured way so that there will be minimum distractions.   They also give clear boundaries to the students and explain what are acceptable behaviours and what are not.  Punishment will be meted out and rewards will be given appropriately, consistently and swiftly to motivate the students to develop positive behaviour and discipline for a more productive teaching experience.

Thirdly, effective teachers have a passion for teaching and learning.  Instead of rote-learning, great teachers always engage children to keep them interested.  They do not allow a few students to dominate the class but use varied and lively approaches in their lesson planning.  They encourage students to ask "why" and guide them along as they explore the topics at deeper level.  Students usually develop a greater interest in learning about the subjects and excel better in their grades.

Finally, great teachers have an intense desire to make a difference in the lives of their students.  Great teachers form strong relationship with their students and show that they genuinely care for their students.  They make themselves approachable and available to students even after class.  For example, some teachers  add their students as friends on Facebook and encourage them to drop them a message if they are in need of any advice.  These teachers have become more like a friend or even a confidant to their students.

With all these qualities required, it is no wonder that it is hard to find great teachers.  Being an effective and caring teacher is definitely a tall order.  This is why it is said that "being a teacher is more of a calling than a profession".  It is no wonder that great teachers are rare and few.



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Thursday, May 17, 2012

Get more than 35-40 for PSLE English Model Composition

Gone are the days where students can write a simple story, throw in some vocabulary phrases and end the story with 'I learnt a lesson' format.  Writing PSLE composition has become far more demanding now.  In order to get an A* for English in the PSLE, one has to get almost full marks for the composition component.  So what constitutes an excellent composition?

Writing a fantastic PSLE essay is akin to writing a bestseller at Amazon.  There must be 'ingredients' that a writer cannot do without.  Perhaps one can get some ideas from the best-selling novel Hunger Games. I do not promote this book especially to younger children but there are some writing tips we can use for our composition writing to get top grades:-

1) The composition must suck the readers (the examiner-teacher-markers) into the plot. (Force the character into action and decisions that one would never choose if not for the narrative)
2) The pace of the compostion must be fast.  (Don't drag your story!)
3) It should explore the hearts and minds of men. (Show your dialogue and thought!)
4) Explore positive themes, eg self-sacrifice or the healing of a soured relationship.  (Do not propagate a negative theme by the time you reach the end of the story.)
5) Add a creative twist.  (In Gladiator, the crowd expects the triumphant slave to kill the defeated one but he refuses and defies the king.  Now, he  inspires and the people adores him!)

Do you know how to write A* PSLE English compositions?  Do you want to score distinction in PSLE English?  Writing is NOT the key.  Getting feedback for what you have written is the key to better writing.  All the best for your coming PSLE examinations.  Cheers!


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Friday, May 4, 2012

Cohesion Strategies: Transitional Words and Phrases


By , About.com Guide

A key quality of an effective paragraph is unity. A unified paragraph sticks to one topic from start to finish, with every sentence contributing to the central purpose and main idea of that paragraph.
But a strong paragraph is more than just a collection of loose sentences. Those sentences need to be clearly connected so that readers can follow along, recognizing how one detail leads to the next. A paragraph with clearly connected sentences is said to be cohesive.
The following paragraph is unified and cohesive. Notice how the italicized words and phrases (calledtransitions) guide us along, helping us see how one detail leads to the next.

Why I Don't Make My Bed

Ever since I moved into my own apartment last fall, I have gotten out of the habit of making my bed--except on Fridays, of course, when I change the sheets. Although some people may think that I am a slob, I have some sound reasons for breaking the bed-making habit. In the first place, I am not concerned about maintaining a tidy bedroom because no one except me ever ventures in there. If there is ever a fire inspection or a surprise date, I suppose I can dash in there to fluff up the pillow and slap on a spread. Otherwise, I am not bothered. In addition, I find nothing uncomfortable about crawling into a rumpled mass of sheets and blankets. On the contrary, I enjoy poking out a cozy space for myself before drifting off to sleep. Also, I think that a tightly made bed is downright uncomfortable: entering one makes me feel like a loaf of bread being wrapped and sealed. Finally, and most importantly, I think bed-making is an awful way to waste time in the morning. I would rather spend those precious minutes checking my email or feeding the cat than tucking in corners or snapping the spread.
Transitional words and phrases guide readers from one sentence to the next. Although they most often appear at the beginning of a sentence, they may also show up after the subject. Here are the common transitional expressions, grouped according to the type of relationship shown by each.


1. Addition Transitions

    and
    also
    besides
    first, second, third
    in addition
    in the first place, in the second place, in the third place
    furthermore
    moreover
    to begin with, next, finally
    Example
    In the first place, no "burning" in the sense of combustion, as in the burning of wood, occurs in a volcano; moreover, volcanoes are not necessarily mountains; furthermore, the activity takes place not always at the summit but more commonly on the sides or flanks; and finally, the "smoke" is not smoke but condensed steam.
    (Fred Bullard, Volcanoes in History)

2. Cause-Effect Transitions

    accordingly
    and so
    as a result
    consequently
    for this reason
    hence
    so
    then
    therefore
    thus
    Example
    The ideologue is often brilliant. Consequently some of us distrust brilliance when we should distrust the ideologue.
    (Clifton Fadiman)

3. Comparison Transitions

    by the same token
    in like manner
    in the same way
    in similar fashion
    likewise
    similarly
    Example
    When you start with a portrait and search for a pure form, a clear volume, through successive eliminations, you arrive inevitably at the egg. Likewise, starting with the egg and following the same process in reverse, one finishes with the portrait.
    (Pablo Picasso)

4. Contrast Transitions

    but
    however
    in contrast
    instead
    nevertheless
    on the contrary
    on the other hand
    still
    yet
    Example
    Every American, to the last man, lays claim to a “sense” of humor and guards it as his most significant spiritual trait, yet rejects humor as a contaminating element wherever found. America is a nation of comics and comedians; nevertheless, humor has no stature and is accepted only after the death of the perpetrator.
    (E. B. White)

5. Conclusion and Summary Transitions

    and so
    after all
    at last
    finally
    in brief
    in closing
    in conclusion
    on the whole
    to conclude
    to summarize
    Example
    Reporters are not paid to operate in retrospect. Because when news begins to solidify into current events and finally harden into history, it is the stories we didn’t write, the questions we didn’t ask that prove far, far more damaging than the ones we did.
    (Anna Quindlen)

6. Example Transitions

    as an example
    for example
    for instance
    specifically
    thus
    to illustrate
    Example
    With all the ingenuity involved in hiding delicacies on the body, this process automatically excludes certain foods. For example, a turkey sandwich is welcome, but the cumbersome cantaloupe is not.
    (Steve Martin, "How to Fold Soup")

7. Insistence Transitions

    in fact
    indeed
    no
    yes
    Example
    The joy of giving is indeed a pleasure, especially when you get rid of something you don’t want.
    (Frank Butler, Going My Way)

8. Place Transitions

    above
    alongside
    beneath
    beyond
    farther along
    in back
    in front
    nearby
    on top of
    to the left
    to the right
    under
    upon
    Example
    What did it matter where you lay once you were dead? In a dirty sump or in a marble toweron top of a high hill? You were dead, you were sleeping the big sleep, you were not bothered by things like that.
    (Raymond Chandler, The Big Sleep)

9. Restatement Transitions

    in other words
    in short
    in simpler terms
    that is
    to put it differently
    to repeat
    Example
    Anthropologist Geoffrey Gorer studied the few peaceful human tribes and discovered one common characteristic: sex roles were not polarized. Differences of dress and occupation were at a minimum. Society in other words, was not using sexual blackmail as a way of getting women to do cheap labor, or men to be aggressive.
    (Gloria Steinem, "What It Would Be Like If Women Win")

10. Time Transitions

    afterward
    at the same time
    currently
    earlier
    formerly
    immediately
    in the future
    in the meantime
    in the past
    later
    meanwhile
    previously
    simultaneously
    subsequently
    then
    until now
"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away."

Henry David Thoreau