Vivid Description: A classroom
In class, my notorious friends were
running all over and throwing paper planes across the classroom. Some were
chewing bubble gums while other were eating.
The smell of their perspiration filled the air as they had just finished
their basketball practice. A sweet jasmine fragrance suddenly lingered in the
air. It was a familiar scent — the perfume of Mrs Raja. Her eyes were like hot
coals. Trouble was brewing.
Vivid Description: An empty theme
park
A gust of chilling wind howled and
blew in curves. Piles of dead leaves fluttered in the air and scattered all
around the theme park. The sun was beginning to set and there was no one in
sight, only elongated shadows of dim lampposts and lonely trees. Instead of
laughter, there was only silence. Instead of merriment, there was only
loneliness.
OR
Silence blanketed the amusement
park. Time literally froze. The usual roar of exuberance was absent. Laughter
was no longer there. Stalls of popcorn, cotton candy and hotdog buns vanished.
The rides in rainbow colours and bright lights halted and dulled. The lights
were out. Imagery of happy families with parents and children were all gone.
Sadly, the park seemed abandoned like a lonely grandfather yearning for the
visit of his beloved grandchildren.
Vivid Description: School canteen
The school bell shrieked, signalling
recess time. John was making his way to
the Japanese food stall which he always patronised. The smell of the rich broth
charged into his nostrils and whetted his appetite. After he had bought his
favourite udon, he looked a vacant scat but accidentally tripped over and the
udon flew and fell onto the principal's head and he ended up looking like a
very wet mop.
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